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高中英语书面表达题的专题和答案

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高中英语书面表达题的专题和答案
  高中英语书面表达题的专题

考点一 提纲类

Writing 1 (2016·全国)

假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括:

1.主题:环境保护;

2.展览时间;

3.投稿邮箱:.

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文

Writing 2 (2016·全国)

假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约

1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Writing  (2016·北京)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中Jim回信,内容包括:

1.该人物是谁;

2.该人物的主要贡献;

3.该人物对你的影响。

注意:1.词数不少于50;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

you.s,

Li Hua

Writing 4 (2016·四川)

某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容应包括:

1.你最喜欢的季节;

2.你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如:气候、景色、活动、感受……)。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.题目已为你写好;

3.行文连贯,语篇完整;

4.文中不得透露个人真实信息。

Writing  (2016·浙江)

“Planning is good,but doing is better”是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。

要求如下:

1.简述你对这句名言的理解;

2.用一个具体事例加以说明;

3.给出恰当的结尾。

注意:1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数);

2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better

Writing  (2015·新课标全国 )

假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:

1.栏目介绍。

2.稿件内容;

3.稿件长度:约400词;

4.交稿日期:6月28日前。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 7 (2015·新课标全国)

假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:

1.出发及返回时间;

2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.结语已为你写好。

Dear Lucy,

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 8 (2014·福建)

如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。

“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”

—Sir Winston Churchill

内容要求:

1.你对该引语的理解;

2.你的相关经历;

3.恰当的结尾。

注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;

3.词数:120左右。

This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that

Writing 9  (2014·大纲全国)

一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

1.家庭;

2.工作;

3.业余生活。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

Writing 10 (2014·重庆)

青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。

假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:

●赞同Susan的看法

●你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么

●该礼物的意义

●期待大家回复

注意:1.词数不少于80;

2.符合语言规范;

3.开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

I am a high school student from China.

考点二 图画、图表类

Writing 1 (2016·北京)

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。

注意:词数不少于60。

提示词:地球日Earth Day

Writing  (2015·北京)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中,向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程,并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英语稿件。

注意:词数不少于60。

提示词:一个面团 a piece of dough

面人 dough figurine

Writing 3 (2015·福建)

请阅读下面图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

内容包括:

1.描述画面;

2.概述其含义;

3.谈谈个人感想。

凿壁偷光

注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2.可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、行文连贯;

3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:凿,钻:bore

In the picture,

Writing 4 (2015·江苏)

请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

other day, a netizen(网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo. It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane, and insisting that it leave the track. The photo drew about 7,000 comments on the social media platform. Despite the thumbs­up(点赞) given to the old lady, some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.

riders of e­bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles. Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic. Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.

2005 to 2014, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million. Currently, China had 15% of the world's total vehicles.

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;

2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;

3.根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

考点三 应用类

Writing 1 (2016·全国Ⅰ)

假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Writing  (2015·北京)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括:

1.介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间,地点,参加者等);

2.说明你打算参加的原因;

3.询问对方的意向。

注意:1.词数不少于50;

2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

提示词:龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp

Dear Jim,

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing  (2015·四川)

假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;

2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;

3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;

4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。

注意:1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称;

Hi Sharon,

This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

Li Xia

Writing 4 (2015·天津)

假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。

(1)自我介绍;

(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;

(3)询问对方的其他需求。

注意:1.词数不少于100;

2.请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。

参考词汇: 学生会 the Student Union

Dear Chris,

Yours,

Li Jin

Writing 5 (2015·陕西)

假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。

Volunteers Wanted

Our annual English Festival,which will be held on June 15­17,2015,is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at .

写作要点:

1.表达写作意图;

2.陈述应征目的;

3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。

写作要求:

1.邮件词数不少于100;

2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;

3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;

4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Ms Chen,

I'm Li Hua,a student from Class 2, Grade 3.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Writing 6 (2015·重庆)

是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式:一是自由分享(wild release),即把书放在指定地点,由其他参与者自由获取;二是定向分享(controlled release),即直接传递给另一位参与者。

假设你是李华,请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括:

·表明写信目的

·选择一种分享方式

·简述做出该选择的理由

·希望了解更多信息

注意:(1)词数不少于80;

(2)书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

Writing 7 (2014·新课标全国)

假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

注意:1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇:住宿accommodation

Writing 8 (2014·天津)

假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:

1.表示欢迎

2.介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如天气,饮食等)

3.介绍本班情况

4.希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊

注意:1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。

2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。

3.词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数。

4.参考词汇:交换生 exchange student

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Jin,monitor of Class One,Grade Eleven.

Yours,

Li Jin

Writing  (2014·陕西)

假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。

写作要点:

1.表示对客人的欢迎;

2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);

3.表达对客人的祝愿。

写作要求:

1.词数不少于100;

2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear American guests,

考点四 开放、半开放类

Writing 1 (2016·江苏)

请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

In recent years,internet voting has become increasing popular in le not only cast on-line votes themselves,but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.

Li Jiang,a high school student,is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition,organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily Jiang visits the website and reads all the is deeply moved by their glorious is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” has already received three similar invitations this uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition,the family will win an overseas tour for Hua likes his cousin very much,but he finds other singers perform even vote,or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;

2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

Writing  (2015·湖北)

请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。

Questioning is a bridge to you begin to doubt something and search for an answer,you will learn.

注意:1.无须写标题;

2.除诗歌外,文体不限;

3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;

4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

5.词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

Writing 3 (2015·安徽)

某英文杂志正在举办以 “Fancy yourself as an interviewer” 为主题的征文活动,请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview” 为题, 写一篇英语短文。

内容包括:

1.采访的对象;

2.采访的原因;

3.想提的问题。

注意:1.词数120左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。

A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

Writing 4 (2015·浙江)

在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题,用英语与一篇100~120个词的短文。要求如下:

1.从以上两种做法中选择一种;

2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。

注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则,按考试作弊行为认定。

When I Have a Different Opinion

Writing 5 (2015·湖南)

请以老师当众表扬你为话题,用下面所给句子开头,续写一篇英语短文。

注意:1. 续写词数不少于120个;

2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Writing 6 (2014·湖北)

请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。

Small things make a big small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

注意:1.无须写标题;

2.除诗歌外,文体不限;

3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;

4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

5.词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

Writing 7 (2014·山东)

某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1.该谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

1.A friend in need is a friend indeed.

e there's a will,there's a way.

注意:1.词数:120~150;

2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

参考词汇:谚语 proverb

Writing 8 (2014·重庆)

请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。

“My friend falls,I laugh;my phone falls,I cry.”

要求:1.就此材料发表你的看法;

2.紧扣材料,有明确的观点;

3.词数不少于60。

B组 2016~2015模拟精选题

Writing 1 (2016·山西重点中学协作体模拟)

你校的外教Thomas想了解刚刚结束的英语口语培训班效果,以便制定下一步的培训计划。假如你是李明,是该培训班的学员,想再参加写作培训,请按照所给提示用英语给Thomas 写一封电子邮件。

1.说明收获;

2.表达谢意;

3.提出建议或要求。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.邮件的开关和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Writing 2 (2016·汉中市二次质检)

假定你是李华,你在上周日乘坐一辆公交车,该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下:

1.司机的不文明行为(聊天、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。

2.希望尽快查清此事。

注意:1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Writing 3 (2016·临沂一模)

假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jamie发邮件告诉你他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣,但是在阅读时遇到了很多困难,比如很多Jamie回邮件。内容要点如下:

1.表示理解并给予安慰;

2.提出建议并说明理由。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。信中不能出现本人相关信息。

Writing 4 (2016·株洲质检)

假定你是李华,诺丁汉大学(The University of Nottingham)2016年计划在中国招收一批优秀高中毕业生,你准备报名。请你向该校招生负责人Dr Dan发一封电子邮件,包括以下内容:

1.简要说明你的意向及个人情况;

2.适当咨询申请入学的准备工作(如:笔试、面试的时间以及考查重点、学费等);

3.具体询问学校的课程安排以及学生的在校学习、课外活动、业余生活、住宿等情况。

注意:1.词数100左右。

2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。

Writing 5 (2016·福州四地六校联考)

假定你们学校报社征集以“我最感激的人——妈妈”为主题的英语作文,请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈。

要点:1.简要介绍妈妈;

2.感激

3.如何感激。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头以为你写好,但不记入总词数。

Everyone has a person he wants to say thank-you to in his deep heart.I owe my great gratitude to my mother.

Writing 6 (2016·河北定兴中学月考)

假如你是高中生李华,最近你班组织了一次周末郊游,旅途中你发现很多同学举止不文明,比如随手乱扔垃圾,在建筑物上乱涂乱画,采摘花草,在公众场合大声喧哗等。请你就这一现象写一篇英语短文呼吁大家进行绿色、环保

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear students,

Last weekend,our class went on an interesting camping the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 7 (2016·山东师大附中上学期三模)

近来,中国游客在海外的不文明行为倍受争议。假设你是李华,一名国际旅行社的导游,就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根

1.列举不文明行为;2.指出其影响;3.提出建议。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.首句已给出,不计入总词数。

As a tour guide of an international travel agency,I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.

Writing 8 (2015·山东省实验中学模拟)

假如你是李华,你的英国朋友John近期将来中国参加短期语言培训。食宿被安排在你市远大路的塔楼酒店。他来信询问酒店的相关信息,请你根据以下图示和信息给他写一封回信。要点如下:

1.图示信息;

2.住宿费用:每人每天200元;

3.餐厅供餐时间:7:30 am—9:00 am;

5:30 pm—8:00 pm。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

Im very glad to hear that you will come to my city for short-term language training.

Writing 9 (2015·山东曲阜4月)

假如你是李华,是校报的一名小记者。请根据自己的经历写一篇英语稿件,介绍你参加的一次志愿者活动。内容包括:

1.参加活动的原因;

2.描写该活动的过程;

3.活动之后的感受。

注意:词数100左右。

Writing 10 (2015·

学校将为高三学生举办一场英语沙龙。假如你是学生会主席李华,请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿,呼吁高三学生调节好学习和生活,保持良好的心态。

内容要点:

1.描述周围同学现状;熬夜多,运动少,学习效率不高。

2.提出至少两条建议。

注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Good morning,everyone!Its my honor to be here to make a short speech.

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参考范文

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography theme of the show is environmental will start from June 15th and last for three student who is interested is welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you?ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our is surely a good chance for more people to see you want to join, you can send your photos to .

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 2

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Dear Bob,

How is everything going? I’m writing to express my regret at being unable to go to the bookstore with you next weekend,which I have promised.I feel terribly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.

What makes me concerned is my final exam which will be held two weeks later, so I have to make a preparation for it at that time.I hope you could appreciate that I must spare no effort to do well in my final exam if d we make another appointment to go to the bookstore together?

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my se let me know what time is OK for ing forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 3

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Dear__Jim,

Its great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.

As for my favorite figure in Chinese history it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing ,in his book,Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World),introduced modern technologies and ideas to opened our eyes to the fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.

Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.

Cheers!

Yours,

Li__Hua

Writing

【参考范文】

The Season I Like Best

If someone asks me which season I like best,I can tell him without hesitation that spring is my favorite of the four seasons.

Two reasons may account for why I like spring spring,the weather gets warmer and the days get ything begins to kinds of flowers start to come out,which give the earth a pretty coat,making this world a better place to live des,I like to go camping in spring and I feel so refreshed in the surrounding of nature.I will forget all my bad moods when walking in nature.

Spring is my favorite season.

Writing 5

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Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we ver,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical r that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

Writing 6

【参考范文】

I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home d you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be d we have our article before June 28?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 7

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I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We'll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.

If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking__forward__to__your__reply.

Yours,

Li__Hua

Writing 8

【思路点拨】

这是一篇话题类作文。要求根据引语写出对成功的理解。需要写的话题已经给出需要我们120词左右不要太多也不要太少。

【参考范文】

This__quotation__from__Winston__Churchill__tells__us__that we shouldn't get discouraged right after er

At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday g excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding ver,it was harder than bike seemed too heavy and difficult to e still,I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep more practice,I did better and ing back,I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.

Actually,we can't succeed in everything we 's important is that we should stick to it.

Writing 9

【思路点拨】

主题:“十年后的我”;

内容要点:家庭、工作、业余生活三方面。

段落层次:适当插入连接词使文章层次分

4.亮点说明:适当使用多种句式结构避免句式单一;恰当使用高级词汇避免尽用“儿科词汇”以增加文章亮点提高文章档次。

【参考范文】

n__the__future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own familyong well with my colleagues.I'll do a good job in whatever I my free time,I'll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball my holidays,I'll travel around the a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.

Writing 10

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nsive or really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.

Years ago,I received a gift from a friend on my birthday,who is now living far delighted me at the sight of was a piece of paper cutting,a Chinese traditional the gift,he included a letter,in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting took him several weeks to learn to make 's why I value it more than any other gift I received that day.

Now,it is still hanging on the wall of my ever I look at it,I couldn't help thinking of my ver far away we are,we feel close to each I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.

考点二 图画、图表类

Writing 1

【参考范文】

A week before Earth Day,posters were put up around our school,calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used brought to our classroom worn-out clothes,pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles,and turned those into dolls,handbags,tissue boxes and small weekend,we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people were very happy with those unexpected gifts,especially little kids and elderly did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.

We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.

Writing 2

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇图画作文用图画的形式展示了一个活动过程。写作时要认真审读四幅图画理清其内在的逻辑关系交代清楚活动的时间、地点、人物和活动的具体内容;同时运用恰当的过渡词把四幅图画的内容连成一个有机的整体。

【参考范文】

When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.

We hope we can have more activities of this kind!

【亮点点评】

本文注意使用了过渡词汇first等来衔接句子和段落使文章更有条理行文连贯。

时态把握准确主要运用了一般过去时文章上下文时态保持一致。

恰当运用了高级结构如非谓语动词 Looking at the figurines, ;定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table...;时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, 等让文章靓丽起来。

Writing

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇漫画类作文要求根据图画展示内容写一篇120词左右的短文。

写作要点:1.描述图画(一般现在时)

概述其含义(取自中国古代成语“凿壁偷光”概述其内容并渗透“刻苦求学”的思想)

谈个人感想(根据这个成语想到自身如何去做)

【参考范文】

sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese boyd even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

se,things are totally different is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that work pays should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

【亮点点评】

本文简明扼要要点齐全信息丰富条理清晰。灵活运用了高级词汇如:shabby, 等体现出作者丰富的词汇积累能力。句型上运用了强调句型丰富了句式结构;最后一句起到了画龙点睛的作用是一篇上等佳作。

Writing

【思路点拨】

书面表达部分属于给材料作文的类型提供了文字和图表相结合的三份材料要求考生在概要叙述材料的基础上分析导致交通问题的主要原因并从社会规范和个人行为两方面讨论自己得到的启示。

【参考范文】

l examples.

Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, s, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

【亮点点评】

文章要点全语法知识应用灵活且使用得当堪称佳作。文中开头就使用not also 句式使行文非常连贯。高级词汇in spite of, 等强调句式虚拟语气的应用等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。

考点三 应用类

Writing 1

【参考范文】

Dear ins,

My name is Li Hua, and Im one of your students in the International Economy and Commercial Department.I’m writing to ask you for some help.

In order to earn some extra money and reduce my family’s burden, I’d like to go to a foreign trading company to find a part-time job in the coming summer finished the application and personal I’m not sure if they are written well enough to catch their se refer to the attachments which include the application and resume.

I’d appreciate it if you could help me revise them.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Writing

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇典型的邀请信重点是李华邀请美国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营要按照邀请信的格式进行写作即发出邀请介绍活动的时间地点内容参加原因等最后说明自己的期待和感谢。

【参考范文】

I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.

This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I'll send you more information.

Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.

Yours,

Li Hua

【亮点点评】

本文结构紧凑层次分明运用了邀请信的一些常用语如I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.文中的时态把握较好使用了一般将来时和一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情。

Writing

【思路点拨】

考查应用类作文。在写作时需要注意以下几个方面:首先需要审题。即:审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次考生要能够抓中心列要点列出写作提纲。写作文时一定要切题抓住中心紧扣要点.然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下考生应该选择自1、 2;第二段写要点3;第三段写要点4, 以及希望得到对方的回信。

【参考范文】

This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am quite interested in it.I think I'm fit for a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many addition,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.

Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin the saying goes, practice makes des, you can also read some books in Chinese,see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio king and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

In your post, you say you can teach English as a is just what I want.I'm eager to improve my , if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

Hope for your early reply!

Yours,

Li Xia

【亮点点评】

本文要点齐全结构完整。使用多种句式如定语从句:I am Chinese, ;表语从句:It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。

Writing

【参考范文】

I'm Li Jin, Chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang Middle I have a piece of good news to tell you.

Our school will donate 5,000 copies of different valuable books to your class, which include popular science books, classic works and so lar science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way and they can help you understand science subjects better and arouse your curiosity about scientific sic works present great thoughts through fascinating stories and not only offer you joy and excitement, but also encourage you to think critically.

We will take these books to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year.

If you have more needs, please let me know as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely

Li Jin

【亮点点评】

本文要点齐全较好地完成了规定的任务同时也应用了较多的语法结构和词汇包括不定式to tell you作后置定语非限制性定语从句which include...连接词and的灵活运用连接并列谓语引导的条件状语从句等。总之全文结构紧凑句际间连接顺畅是一篇难得的佳作。

Writing

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇应用文要求根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。文章要求明确思路清晰是学生熟悉的话题。

写作要点:1.表达写信意图(申请“英语文化节”学生自愿者)

陈述应征目的(如:提高英语能力交流能力等)

说明应征条件(性格能力等方面)

【参考范文】

I'm__Li__Hua,a__student__from__Class__2,Grade__3.I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering,my service,I will be able to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my des,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English essfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【亮点点评】

本文要点齐全完全符合应征邮件的要求层次分明脉络清晰。开门见山地表达了写信的意图并对自己应征目的和应征条件分别进行了阐述同时在文章最后表达了自己的信心和愿望。文章中的by offering my service以及非限制性定语从句的使用都是文中的亮点所在organisational ability,communication skills,appreciate,live up to your expectations等高级词汇运用也体现了作者深厚的语言功底。总之是一篇不可多得的佳作。

Writing

【思路点拨】

考查属于书信类作文。首先需要审题。即:审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次要列好提纲。一、表明写信目的:申请参加该活动(添加得知消息);二、选择一种分享方式:二者选

【参考范文】

organizing this activity to share books worldwide,I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.

You've introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled the two,the latter wins my means of controlled release,I only need to deliver books to other participants,not only are books shared but also it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.

If you could provide more specific information,I would be well grateful.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【亮点点评】

本文要点齐全结构完整。使用多种短语和高级句式如not also;build up;分词作状语:Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide;定语从句:I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading 等。

Writing

【思路点拨】

内容要点:

参加为期六周的英语班

询问:

(1)课程开始时间、每周课时

(2)每班人数

(3)学费、住宿

【参考范文】

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English t?Besidesuld not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is d there be host family or university dormitory?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Writing 8

【参考范文】

I'm__Li__Jin,monitor__of__Class__One,Grade__Eleven.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange 're welcome to stay with us.

Our school is located in a northern city of China,where you can taste many kinds of delicious food,because it is well famous for its city witnesses four different seasons,plenty of sunshine and good rainfall,but in winter you may feel a little cold.

Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls,who are warm and generous and ready to offer are very friendly and easy to get along will have a good time and get used to the life soon.

Yours,

Li__Jin

Writing 9

【思路点拨】

本文是应用文写作写一篇欢迎词。

内容要点:

(1)欢迎

(2)活动介绍(目的内容等)

(3)祝愿

人称:代表学校欢迎国外代表团故应用第一人称I或者we。

时态:一般现在时

【参考范文】

On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.

As scheduled,we have English Talent Show purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and programme consists of the following activities:recitation

Dear guests,you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.

I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with k you.

考点四 开放、半开放类

Writing 1

【参考范文】

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular,and many competitions get people involved in is beneficial to some people,while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion,on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed,since it is no more than a way to participate in public makes no difference from ordinary voting events,in which candidates go around to seek addition,the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient,regardless of time and hermore,voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest,voters sometimes feel annoyed,not because they hate voting,but because they are divided between emotion and gs will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to efore,I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.

Writing

【参考范文】

arn without questioning,in other words questioning is a bridge to learning or is the very beginning of learning English for example,when we learn the meaning of the phrase “pick up”,our first reaction is what it means and how we can use a question keeps us going on come the following questions: can we find a sentence where we can use it? Or can we find a dictionary to look it up? After the questions being put forward one by one,our actions go further and further,until we get a good command of it at when you are beginning to learn something,don't be shy to ask questions,only with the questions can we have the inspiration to learn something new or do better than before.

Writing 3

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇命题材料作文作文的写作要点已经给出考生需要根据提示进行写作必须涵盖所有要点还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性不能出现与本人有关的信息。

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A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

Liwei.

I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

【亮点点评】

范文使用了一些重点句型:定语从句I would原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...;宾语从句I could learn a great deal from him about it,②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;条件状语从句If I could interview him;非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等显示了扎实的语法功底也使作文的句式变得多样化;范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语:not also...;one of the...;the first to do sth, ;a great deal;等使作文的内容得到了丰富;范文注意使用not also, 和finally等来衔接句子使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。

Writing

【思路点拨】

本文是一篇开放式写作属于议论文的范畴。首先确定人称以第一人称为主表达1.首先明确自己的观点:坚持自己的观点还是尊重大多数同学的意见二者只能取其一。2.以具体事例阐述你这么选择的理由。写作时注意用词准确句际间连贯性要强使上下文衔接浑然一体。

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When I Have a Different Opinion

d choose to stick to doing so,I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

Once we were discussing where to go for an of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my did have a good time that opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

【亮点点评】

本文结构清晰要点全面层次清楚。写作中使用了较高级的词语为文章增色不少同时准确使用了复杂句子结构包括非谓语动词to deal with...等引导的时间状语从句引导的对比句引导的原因状语从句连接的并列结构等。

Writing

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my teacher before my classmates.

When I was young, I was very shy. I didn't dare to speak in public. When the teacher asked me to answer a question, I was always too nervous to answer it, which made me very sad.

One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text. I recited it fluently. The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates. I told him that I was too nervous, but he insisted that I should do it. The next morning, I was asked to recite the text that I had prepared. Although I did poorly, the teacher praised me very much. I was so proud of myself that day.

After that, I was frequently praised before my classmates and began to gain confidence. I tried even harder and the teacher praised me more. Eventually,I overcame my shyness. It was the teacher's praise that made me become a better student.

Writing 6

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I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car,which drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without ily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest ared with the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.

As a member of the society,I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

Writing 7

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Where there's a will,

I can't agree more with the our daily life,we will face all kinds of challenges and long as we possess a strong will to get through such hurdles instead of running away from them,we will possess success and a brilliant future.

Take myself for example.I was born in a poor family,and my parents are both laid-off workers.I do cherish the educational opportunity my parents offer to me and I always adopt the motto—“Where there is a willstudy around the clock to prepare for the College Entrance ugh my constant efforts,I believe I can change not only my own fate but also the worrying situation of my family.

Therefore,I firmly believe that our future depends on a strong will.

Writing 8

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;my phone over,it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.

Personally,it is completely wrong of him to behave with such an attitude towards others and a matter of fact,none of us can live alone in all depend on others sometimes to some everyone does and thinks as he does,he'll not live any longer in the world.

I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in we can have someone to turn to when in rwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or is what the saying goes:“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.

Writing 1

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Dear Thomas,

Im so thankful to you for your kindness and help in the oral English training course. My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training program,during which I made many new friends.

I used to be shy and untalkative. When staying with my classmates,I tried to communicate with them in English,but I often made mistakes. Whenever I met with native speakers,I had a strong willing to practise English,but I wasnt brave enough to open my mouth,which worried me for a long time. Luckily enough,your training course smoothed away all the difficulties. I have benefited from it.

Now,Im glad to learn you are to organize more training courses,and I hope I can get your advice on how to improve my writing. In short,Im looking forward to more new things in our future courses.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Writing 2

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Dear__Sir,

I__am__Li__Hua.__I__am__writing__to complain about one of your bus-drivers improper and rude behaviors.

Last Sunday, I was taking a bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”

I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

Yours__sincerely,

Li__Hua

Writing 3

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I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.

First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 4

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Dear Dr Dan,

Im writing to ask for some information about your school and how to become admit to your university.

As a senior 3 girl, I have always been considering going abroad for further studies, which I suppose will benefit me greatly in the long term. I’m an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.

What puzzles me is that I don’t know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about what to be prepared for the test. Besides this, I will greatly appreciate it if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the after-school activities, spare-time life and the tuition.

Thank you so much and Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Writing

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Everyone__has__a__person__he__wants__to__say__thank-you__to__in__his__deep__heart.I__owe__my__great__gratitude__to__my__mother.

My mother is a primary school teacher who graduated from a teachers is a devoted mother as well as a kind and patient teacher.I was attended considerately by her every day,especially this year when I am in Senior often cooks delicious dishes for me and helps me clean up my s more,she even accompanies me deep into the night every time I am doing my important of all,whenever I get upset or lose heart,she will comfort me and encourage me until I have cheered up.I appreciate her motto “Heaven will always leave a door long as you work hard,you will definitely succeed.”

So now I spare no efforts in studying and focus all my attention on my lessons in order to be admitted into a famous university next year,so that I can reward my mother.

Writing 6

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Dear__students,

Last__weekend,our__class__went__on__an__interesting__camping____the__way__we__enjoyed__the__beautiful__scenery__and__fresh__ver,many of us didnt notice the bad effects on the environment due to our bad of us threw rubbish here and there,leaving words on famous buildings,picking flowers and speaking loudly in public,etc.

Firstly,what these students did is against the spirit of eco-travel.A true eco-travel is a journey which not only allows us to express our love for nature but also needs our we enjoy the beauty of nature we cant damage all we should do is protect the environment and wildlife.

Only when we improve our awareness of eco-travel can our earth become more and more r all,the earth is the only place for us to live on.

Best__wishes!

Yours,

Li__Hua

Writing 7

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As__a__tour__guide__of__an__international__travel__agency,I__find__it__so__embarrassing__to__see__many__Chinese__tourists__behave__badly__ speak loudly in public places,carve characters on tourist attractions,throw rubbish,spit everywhere,and even cross the road ignoring the traffic bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.

Measures should be taken to stop t,before going abroad,tourists should be trained to obey social and public order,and respect local religions and des,it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten ,laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places.I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.

Writing 8

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Dear__John,

Im__very__glad__to__hear__that__you__will__come__to__my__city__for__short-term__language__training. In your letter,you mentioned the Tower is some detailed information about it.

The Tower Hotel is located on Yuanda through the gate of the entrance,and you will see the high building—Tower Hotel,in front of which lies a beautiful nd the building is a swimming pool,where you can go swimming for the swimming pool stands a dining hall,where meals are served from 7:30 am to 9:00 am and between 5:30 pm and 8:00 pm.

As to accommodation fees,everyone should pay 200 yuan per you need further information,please enquire at the reception desk on the ground floor when you arrive here.

Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 9

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As the International Volunteer Day was coming, some volunteers of our school were organized to help the policemen with traffic control in our city. At 8 o’clock on the morning of last Sunday, we gathered at the school gate. One of our teachers was in charge of this activity and he divided us into four groups. Then we went to different crossings near our school. The police officers told us what we should do and how to protect ourselves from danger. We spent the whole morning keeping the streams of traffic flowing smoothly. With a red banner in our hands, we stopped some road users from running the red light. Some citizens praised us for our good deeds. Though we were very tired that morning, we were proud to have offered service to our society.

Writing 10

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Good__morning,__everyone!__It’s__my__honor__to__be__here__to__make__a__short__speech.

Recently I have found that some of our classmates can’t study effectively. Some can’t help falling asleep in class, because they often study too late into the night. Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health.

As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students. We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time,striking a balance between work and leisure. Besides, doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let’s spare some time to do all kinds of sports. And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well.

That’s all. Thank you for listening!


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